Tuesday, May 18, 2010

Writing sample Term 2

On the wet frosty Field grass is weak and frosty grass like ice cubes stick to your feet are num as a ice berg .Wet and shiny grass like carpet sticking on to my feet.The beautiful sun shining on the beautifula grass. The shiny sun is shining in my dark brown eyes.

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  1. Your have used some fabulous adjectives in your writing Matthew. Keep this up as it helps to hold the readers attention. Mrs K

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